Some people think that news has no connection with people’s lives; so it is a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Some people claim that following news is meaningless since there is no relationship between news and our lives. Personally, I strongly disagree with this opinion because of several reasons which will be explained in this essay.
On the one hand, news brings about some benefits. Firstly, because news offers humans a source of the latest information, it allows people to gain a comprehensive overview of everyday problems. In other words, following news helps us to be up-to-date. For example, businessmen often see the current points of the stock market or the shares of different companies so that they can make wise decisions about their business’s plan. Secondly, news can be considered as a source of entertainment. In fact, reading or watching their favorite news categories as a hobby can help people relax. To illustrate, women are usually interested in receiving information about the fashion trends.
However, some people hold the view that news is irrelevant to them so following news is a waste of time. Although the core of this claim is valid, it suffers from a flaw in its reasoning. Firstly, while some news such as international politics are not likely to link to local people, it can be helpful to others such as the government. Secondly, because there are many different categories of news such as lifestyle or sports, people can choose their favorite topics to follow, which is meaningful. Therefore, news is useful and has a strong connection with people’s lives.
In conclusion, I believe that news plays an important part in human’s lives because it acts as a source of the latest information and entertainment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...government. Secondly, because there are many different categories of news such as lifestyle or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14126394052 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93033026296 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9173483167 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318780865035 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115783843531 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962539321771 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188002712351 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709322857068 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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