Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends.
Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?
The question of whether student should be attend in some intensive course after school or not is a controversial issue and not it become a matter of public concern. Therefore, there are some people on both sides who have feeling either for or against. However, in this essay I would argue that it is better that children have their free time for others activities rather than countinue for studying in extra class.
It is argued by some people is that children should have well preparation for future, especially for some cruel exam such as entrance examination if they attend into extra class. However, I disagree with this point of view for three main reasons below.
Firstly, I believe that student will be get basic knowledge which is enough for them in daily class. Admittedly, there are no nessesary for youngster to attend in some intensive course. Clearly enough, student will easily exhausted after long day in school. Moreover, they lost their motivation, focus and even interesting in studying. In another saying, parents will be waste of their money for some extra course or hiring private tutor
Another point taking into consideration is that by studying too much, student will lost their creativity and some other solf skill such as problem solving, communication. Undoubtedly, it is better that student should have more time take part in outdoor activites rather than coutinue join in extra class in the weekend.
Last but not least, children, especially juvenile who are in the developing period will have better health development if they do not study too much. Obviously, by having a good lifestyle they will easily achieve a better physical and mental health if they take part in outdoor sport which is play a paramount role in teenager's height and brain development.
In conlusion, there are convincing arguement both for and against for this matter, but in some aspects I strongly believe that children should not take part in extra course after school and at the weekend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether student should be attend in some intens...
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Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'attended'?
Suggestion: attended
...e question of whether student should be attend in some intensive course after school o...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...not is a controversial issue and not it become a matter of public concern. Therefore, ...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'exhaust'
Suggestion: exhaust
...se. Clearly enough, student will easily exhausted after long day in school. Moreover, the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome extra course or hiring private tutor Another point taking into consideration ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...that by studying too much, student will lost their creativity and some other solf sk...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0421686747 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54713869224 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8610636288 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2487954855 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864399363409 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565618048915 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134465672476 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593889106294 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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