it is more important for government to spend money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation. support your answer with example
There is no shortage of opinion how vital internet is in everyone’s life.No one can deny the advantage that internet brings along with it which has made our lives much easier.I strongly believe that government should spend money to improve internet access than to improve public transport.It’s my firm belief for the number of reasons that I will discuss in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with,improving internet services especially in rural or backward areas can prevent people from being robbed off the advantages of internet.Internet has several resources which helps in enhancing one’s knowledge.I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal experience.I live in village where internet access is very difficult and this problem came into the light during pandemic.Owing to the poor internet quality,I couldn’t attend my online classes.This disadvantage badly impacted my exam grades since I couldn’t gather any knowledge required for exams without my online classes.so ,in order for students to have brighter and obstacle free future,they must be provided with the internet access.
Secondly,I believe that internet can save our plenty of time.Through internet,we can get all the necessary information within seconds by just sitting at one place.Going to library for collecting information and finding resources consumes a lot of time.Drawing from my personal experience,I remember when I was too poor to afford internet,library was the only reliable source for me to do my school homework.since library was far away from my home,it consumed lot of time on traveling.By the time I used to reach library,it would get too late.Consequences to this,I was always left with very less time to spend in the library and complete my homework.These incidents always filled me with lot of discouragement .So, to make people lives less difficult ,they should be given proper internet access.
In the light of reasons mentioned above,I agree that government should spend money in improving internet services rather than improving public transport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47692307692 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17910932411 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.1344086022 402% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 267.253157138 48.9658058833 546% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 445.0 100.406767564 443% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.25 20.6045352989 394% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.45110844103 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28079920765 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23980020026 0.076458572812 314% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127211425093 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23980020026 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127211425093 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.0 11.7677419355 382% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.2 58.1214874552 -33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.1 10.1575268817 355% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.69 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.88 8.01818996416 148% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.0537634409 342% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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