The pie charts below show information on the highest level of education of women in Someland in 1945 and 1995

The pie chart illustrates the detailed information about highest level of education of women in Someland in the years 1945 and 1995.

Overall, In 1945 35 percent of the women have no schooling and same amount of women have completed the third degree. Well coming to the year 1995 half of the women in Someland have completed their first degree. Which shows that education level in the place have developed overwhelmingly in the past five decades.

1945 is the year where majority of the girls do not have their schooling done, which is a whooping percentage of 35. But the conditions were totally vice versa in 1995 with all the girl children doing their schooling. The fact is half of the woman have completed first degree in 1945. Not only first degree but also 20 percentage of the woman have completed year 12 and post graduation too. Remaining one tenth of the woman have completed 9th standard.

In the early year 1945 35 percentage of woman completed till 3rd grade. 15 percent completed 6th class. year 9, year 12, and first degree were completed by 10, 4, and 1 percentage of women respectively. This shows that the woman in Someland were not well educated in the past, but they came to know about the educational importance and have increased their level of education in 1995.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the highest'.
Suggestion: about the highest
...rt illustrates the detailed information about highest level of education of women in Someland...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...land have completed their first degree. Which shows that education level in the place...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'viced'.
Suggestion: viced
... of 35. But the conditions were totally vice versa in 1995 with all the girl childre...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Year
... grade. 15 percent completed 6th class. year 9, year 12, and first degree were compl...
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Line 7, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eased their level of education in 1995.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, third, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.523348745 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5076456472 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3846153846 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28890013474 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117600002057 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165249939547 0.0843802449381 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272955122365 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217736740244 0.0819641961636 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the highest'.
Suggestion: about the highest
...rt illustrates the detailed information about highest level of education of women in Someland...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...land have completed their first degree. Which shows that education level in the place...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'viced'.
Suggestion: viced
... of 35. But the conditions were totally vice versa in 1995 with all the girl childre...
^^^^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Year
... grade. 15 percent completed 6th class. year 9, year 12, and first degree were compl...
^^^^
Line 7, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eased their level of education in 1995.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, third, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.523348745 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5076456472 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3846153846 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28890013474 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117600002057 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165249939547 0.0843802449381 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272955122365 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217736740244 0.0819641961636 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.