The diagram illustrates the production of a fish pie that packed in a microwaveable container which contain some ingredients such as fish, pea, potato. Overall, there are many small processes of making the final product beginning with the delivering of potatoes and culminating in the dispatching of fish pie.
To begin with, potatoes are delivered to a place where they can ben stored up to a month. As soon as potatoes are cleaned and peeled, they are sliced into small size. Afterward, the sliced potatoes are boiled then they are chilled. Those potato slices may be stored or packed with other ingredients to form the final product.
The process of preparing fish for the product happen only for 12 hours or less since the fish was delivered. As soon as Lemon juice and then salt are added to the fresh salmon, they are steamed in the oven to cook through. The steamed salmon’s skins and bones are removed before going into the inspection process. After this, peas and sauce are prepared then all the ingredients are wrapped together with potatoes to make the complete fish pie products. Those completed fish pie are transfer into a large freezer. The final steps is that refrigerated fish fie are stored or dispatched.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this potato' or 'Those potatoes'?
Suggestion: This potato; Those potatoes
...atoes are boiled then they are chilled. Those potato slices may be stored or packed with oth...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...the product happen only for 12 hours or less since the fish was delivered. As soon a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, then, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88516746411 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55812223663 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9113354991 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0833333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105926033121 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423534548285 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412401232648 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803249238008 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496717291932 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.