Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway to reduce traffic congesstion. Others think that building more and wider road is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Disscuss both views and give your opinion.
it is certainly true that with the rapid development of technology, people want to reach speedy for their destination. many people argue that government should built train and subway for cut traffic problem, whereas other think that increase number of road lane is the best way to reduce traffic. this essay will be analyzed both these position before reaching reasonable conclusion.
The first and foremost reason why many people said that creating a train and subway for reduce traffic congestion because this types of network do not any interference of train and other roads. it can be said that where highway meet to the railway line and other roads,then main road to create a flyover as well as subway for traffic problem. Another important benefit is that more land areas do not disturb for create a bridge. For example, government of Gujarat created first circular flyover in Adalaj junction, which nearest farmer did not give their farm property to government and now government reduce traffic problem without carrying farm land. Overall, government create flyover and subway in intersection of other road network and rail line and do not need more land areas.
On the other hand many people suggest that improving road lane for solving traffic problem.
Firstly, this types of road network needed less money compare to flyover and subway. Recently, Oxford University carried a survey of money provided different sector in road development and concluded that almost 60% less money required to create a more lane.Moreover, this type of network speedily complete their project. To illustrate, government of India creating an improve more lane in expressway from Delhi to Mumbai, which is completed almost 75 % in last years.
In recapitulation, although there are two contrasting view about reduce traffic problems, as far as I am concerned that government should spend more money for create a more flyover and subway, because this types of network passenger speedily reach their destination without interference of other road/ rail line and this network do not need more lane to environmental beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2389380531 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65374319428 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516224188791 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1717830218 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.615384615 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293471914853 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116880356226 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886121872976 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180136709189 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554920747782 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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