The first pie chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household.The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts below illustrate how energy is utilized in an average Australian household and radiation of greenhouse gas as a consequence of this energy use.
Generally speaking, most of the Australian household energy was used in heating while in greenhouse gas emission, maximum portion was invested in water heating. However, in both the cases, cooling, lighting and heating involved least portion and considerable amount in other appliances.
Australian household energy associated with heating and water heating comprised to 42% and 32% collectively.On the other hand, in terms of green house gas emission, amount of energy used in heating significantly decreased to 15% and water heating slightly increased to 32%. When added together, both of them made up just above three quarters of the total energy. Addtionally, household energy regarding to other appliances is accounted for 15% which expanded to just above a quarter in greenhouse gas emissions.
On contrary, refrigeration, lighting and cooling included 7%, 4%, 2% of the total energy respectively. In terms of green house secretion, the energy contributed to refrigeration declined to half whereas cooling and lighting utilized the energy by increasing to 3% and 8% successively. On the whole, energy used in these three catagories experienced expansion slightly more than a quarter in greenhouse radiations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58767772512 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12348523518 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545023696682 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2151115817 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.23603664747 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286071736938 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126513257851 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131464950078 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215662743716 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145058689635 0.0819641961636 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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