recommendation to join a gym to friend

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recommendation to join a gym to friend

Dear Ram,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and high of spirit. I got to know from our friend Ram yesterday you also shifted to pharwara. I recommend you to join gym which is located in model town. I am regular visitor of this gym from 2 years. I have hired the personnel trainer who help me to do cardiac exercise as you know I have heart problem.
This gym is one of the best gyms of the phagwara and even its monthly subscription fee is only 3500 hundred of year. As I know that you are busy you would not able to work out in the gym regularly so there is facility of hiring the personnel gym as per request and the fee is charged on the basis number of days
I would recommend the fitness department of this gym. You have to sit longer hours and now you look too much fatty. I personally feel if you will join the fitness centre you will be able to reduce your weight.
Cannot wait to see you in the gym in next week
Your loving
Aman

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oin gym which is located in model town. I am regular visitor of this gym from 2 y...
^
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gular visitor of this gym from 2 years. I have hired the personnel trainer who he...
^
Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e is charged on the basis number of days I would recommend the fitness department...
^^^
Line 6, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... wait to see you in the gym in next week Your loving Aman
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...it to see you in the gym in next week Your loving Aman
^^^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou in the gym in next week Your loving Aman
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12765957447 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11605879971 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601063829787 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6565360043 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262689913622 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105891211064 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109103669283 0.0603063233224 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155928219997 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393382463097 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oin gym which is located in model town. I am regular visitor of this gym from 2 y...
^
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gular visitor of this gym from 2 years. I have hired the personnel trainer who he...
^
Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e is charged on the basis number of days I would recommend the fitness department...
^^^
Line 6, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... wait to see you in the gym in next week Your loving Aman
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...it to see you in the gym in next week Your loving Aman
^^^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou in the gym in next week Your loving Aman
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12765957447 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11605879971 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601063829787 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6565360043 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262689913622 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105891211064 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109103669283 0.0603063233224 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155928219997 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393382463097 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.