smoking is dangerous
It is thought that smoking and tobacco are responsible for numerous deaths and health hassles across the world. Many individuals believe that these products should be banned. I agree with this viewpoint. This essay will elaborate all the reasons behind my claim.
First and Foremost reason for banning the tobacco is that it is leading cause of numerous deaths occurring throughout the world. The world health organization has recently revealed that 50% people lost their lives due to the consumption of smoking only. It casts an adverse affect on the respiratory system of human beings and lead to deadly diseases cancer. Moreover, not only it affects the person physically, but it also declines the mental power by 10%. The countries where the smoking is illegal has lower death rate as compared to countries where it is legalised
The second vivid reason is that it is the responsibility of the government to protect the people from taking such detrimental substances because many people do not know their ill effects. They just consume it as a entertainment. As per the latest Report 70% of smokers do not know how many fatal diseases take birth due to smoking such as cancer and asthma. Furthermore, long terms consumption of smoking also reduces the productivity of individuals. If the productivity of people comes to halt, then the economy of the country will also be affected. As there is one famous proverb” Health body makes the health Nation”
In conclusion, there are plethora of reasons behind imposing a ban on tobacco sale ranging from impacting the individual mentally and physically to brining the economy of the country to standstill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75698398615 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4384463233 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114641090666 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391274821285 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546035459391 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636166164195 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378642297063 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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