It is irrefutable that masses has been themselves utilize the money they earn rather than paid taxes to government . However, I firmly reckon that people should give taxes to the authority which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
The preponderant reasons to agree with the above, because it would have considerably impact on government's revenue. To explain it, well said that tax runs a country . So, if masses not given taxes then nation loss a big amount of income that can be used by state to deploy the basic amenities such a education , healthcare, transportation and job opportunities . Consequently, citizens should pay levy to authorities to enhance the way of living. Furthermore, only those people have to gain the amount of nation who have certain income that comes under tax structure as a result, it would not have extreme burden on employees to pay taxes.
Another reinforcing factor, is it is the basic onus of every citizen to paid tax. Such as my country India which is still strive hard in tendency to make it developed as soon as possible so, it can only be realistic if people send a portion of their income to government for fruitful and smooth running of nations . Additionally , there are umpteen organizations and department s that only run behind money produced from collecting tax like for defence , jails and military . Eventually, tax paying work as a catalyst to make the nation effective and progressing . SO, it is immense responsibility to lend a hand in boosts government earning by giving taxes.
To recapitulate, although, government adequately show where tax amount used , yet, it is the duty of every citizen to paid taxes and compliance authorities decision for betterment of life after paying taxes ultimately beneficial would be the citizens .
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- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements What measures can be taken to protect them 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06101694915 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9566351195 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9052032833 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171430846388 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602145754422 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339115271258 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106011820428 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319569225157 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.