the bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world

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the bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.

The bar The bar chart illustrates information about the percentage of how many people live in the city from six continents across the world. From an overall perspective, the population in asia and africa is projected to have significant growth in the future.

Noticeably, in the period of 1950, asia and africa were considered as the regions that have the lowest number of residents in urban areas with merely 15-17 per cent while the population of city-people in north america gained the highest percentage at 64 per cent which was over 50 per cent of its citizens, following by Oceania, europe and latin america/Caribbean. During 2007, the amount of dwellers living in the city in each continent had increased though the residents in asia's and africa's urban areas were still under half of their population compared to other four regions. The increase of people in the city of latin america rose by more than 30 per cent meanwhile oceania, north america, and europe had a range of urbanised dwellers between 9 and 12 per cent.

To estimate the growth of city-people in 2050, Oceania is predicted to have a slight change in residents who live in the city at only 14 per cent increase. Even though most of population in north america, latin america, and europe will have become more urbanised in 2050, the rise in people in asia's and africa's urban areas shows much changes with about 47-49 per cent increase.chart illustrates information about the percentage of how many people live in the city from six continents across the world. From an overall perspective, the population in asia and africa is projected to have significant growth in the future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'The bar'.
Suggestion: The bar
The bar The bar chart illustrates information about the...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... in asias and africas urban areas shows much changes with about 47-49 per cent incre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 280.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75703182604 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446428571429 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 283.868780488 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.04618406 43.030603864 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.5 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204611614871 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109990949711 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109656660163 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182623198075 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752771316231 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.2329268293 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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