Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university educaton and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is believed that studying at university is everyone's right and all educational expenses should be fully paid by the government. The former view is sensible, however, I completely disagree with this statement and in the following paragraphs I will discuss free university education has a negative effect on government and students.
Firstly, universities accept thousands of students every year. The number of students attending university is very large. Therefore, if tuition fees are free for all students, the government will certainly lose a large amount of money. As a result, the government will have to suffer a lot economically and the government will inevitably face the risk of a financial crisis. Normally, universities are able to operate for a long time because they have stable finances. The student's tuition fee is also a very small part that can offset the cost of maintaining the school's operation. Universities receive a lot of support from the government, not only on tuition fees. Of course, the money received from the collection of student fees and from the government support is used by universities to build new buildings, improve equipment, pay teachers' salaries, and raise school funds for good students. In fact, a university cannot function for many years without the financial resources to pay for the various fees. For example, a university in the Netherlands has maintained for more than 60 years because the financial resources of this school are always stable, the money they get is from educational support of the government and from collection of student fees.
Secondly, free higher education will attract more students to attend university. Then the worst thing that will definitely happen to students is that many people choose to go to college because they don't have to spend money to pay tuition. As a result, the job market for university graduates will be overwhelmed. Many students after graduating from universitiy with a university degree that are still unable to avoid unemployment. Indeed, going to university takes a lot of time and effort from everyone, so no one wants to be unable to find a job after graduating from university. This is a waste of university years.
In short, the free tuition for everyone is highly humane, it creates opportunities for many students to go to university, but this will cause a great loss to the government in all aspects. The most serious effect is the economic loss of the country. Therefore, free university education for all students should not be carried out in an underdeveloped country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in fact, in short, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13539192399 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94881990678 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479809976247 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4042744557 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.952380952 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0476190476 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268875491127 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887975781352 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441065072359 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17682799742 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218685027568 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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