Some of the meaning associated with traditional and religious occasions is unknown or forgotten by a group of people through the hustle and bustle of life. However, someone who solely wants to enjoy themselves does not mean that they are unconscious about these traditions. From a personal point of view, half of these people are imprudent, but the other half are in dilemmas.
One sadly indisputable fact is that many people nowadays forget or do not acknowledge the meaning of their traditions and choose to isolate themselves from those who celebrate. The forget ones might 90% be adults, who do not appreciate traditions since these are "complicated and tedious". For example, weddings in ancient Vietnamese society consisted of 2 important days, one was for "engagement party" and one was for "wedding party". But many Vietnamese wedding ceremonies these days underestimate the first day and only celebrate the second one. Another group of people who tend to forget their traditions is the young ones. With smartphones, modern technological devices, and a comfortable sofa, teenagers can stay all day long instead of helping parents to prepare traditional dishes for traditional occasions or listen to grandma's mysterious stories about their ancestors.
On the other hand, other people who decide to enjoy themselves in traditional holidays must be in extremely difficult circumstances. For introverts, their shyness is one of the biggest barriers which separates them from these exuberant activities. When they are given space to contemplate their traditions, they feel more comfortable as well as have a deeper understanding of the meaning of these occasions. For someone who is in an unfortunate dilemma, they know about the beautiful values of traditional or religious festivals, but they have no choice and end up being alone. Take the Tet festival, for example, most Vietnamese know about its meaning, however, due to traffic congestion or the severe effect of the Covid-19 pandemic, they can not return home for traditional family gatherings.
In conclusion, a group of people chose to divide themselves from dynamic activities as some of them are unaware of their traditional or religious values. However, many people in that group want to enjoy themselves not because they overlook these values, but they are facing some unwanted problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...te themselves from those who celebrate. The forget ones might 90% be adults, who do not ap...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43279569892 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0958348243 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0523761962 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.3125 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179745194632 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671200458244 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348308897638 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122475986164 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196148201388 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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