In the recent year, majority of people migration rulers ares to urban areas because off their individual reason such as seak for jobs, business as well as better lifestyle so on. This trend responsible for social and economic problems because this movement can be reducing a large extent by improving the standard of countryside area.
To commence with, movement of masses from agriculture areas to urban areas can lead to overcrowded in the cities. Which is cause of reducing house spaces. Secondly, cities people face different kind of problems such as job opportunity and clean environment because over population has increased pollution.
Furthermore, migrate people from agriculture area has responsible for reducing farming as well as production of crop. Adoption urban lifestyle rulers area people replace the occupation of farming and tend to doing job in companies instead of agriculture. Most of people has main cause to migrate for greener pastures. On the other hand, this trend dangerous for urban people because they have lack opportunity on cities workplace.
In conclusion, these days urbanization has increased day by day. This trand can control by make a policy for ruler areas people development. Government has given subsidy to farmer for their growth.
- some people think that newspaper are the best media to learn and get information from while others believe that the internet is a better source discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Developments in science and technology have caused environmental problems Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems Discuss both views and 64
- The table below shows the production of potatoes cabbage and onions in five countries in 2012 83
- The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem 38
- When families have a meal together it is considered social activity What are the advances of a family meal Do you think eating together is important to people in your country 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... can lead to overcrowded in the cities. Which is cause of reducing house spaces. Seco...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...ob in companies instead of agriculture. Most of people has main cause to migrate for greener p...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...e because they have lack opportunity on cities workplace. In conclusion, these day...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...ies workplace. In conclusion, these days urbanization has increased day by day. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38805970149 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78912412521 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587064676617 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9414976709 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23402610958 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874909901292 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707161590912 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151693164982 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568409877636 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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