Some academic studies show the features which are been with us innately give shape our characteristics more than others that acquire later. Actually, I do not agree with this idea because we become a person who is represented us truly when we struggle for life and gain experience with hard or easy way.
It is commonly believe that the genes in our DNA are determined to our personality and future life before we were born. Also, consideration of our heritages design our lives is pretty famous in these days. As a matter of fact, it affects people’s potential health fate such as genetic disorders, disease susceptibility and disease carrying and transmission to next generations. So, it makes sense to think that inherental qualities influence who we are even though it is a minor influence.
However, the major impact is the skills we learn in the life fluency and these become the main lines which are restricted the borders. For example, place where we grew up, our friendships in childhood or teenage, university and social life, academic or business career and of course our life partner create our humanities. Every person or incident which are come into our lives, certainly make a difference for the future and if we do not notice that, this is how it is. In addition, there is an evidence with scientific research that the stress level in our early ages specify our psychological state in adulthood.
In conclusion, characterics belong to us since we were born and properties we experienced while living influence our lives minor or major dimension and I think first hand knowledge is the major effect to our personalities.
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- The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...ith hard or easy way. It is commonly believe that the genes in our DNA are determine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97463768116 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8471967996 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.0788851049 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.818181818 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407435637275 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146613653991 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632477483199 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242122771192 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258704977612 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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