The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.
The two imagines compare the development of a coastal village, Seaville, from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, Seaville had been changed dramatically in 30 years, with more facilities, such as roads, houses, roads, hotels, restaurants and so on, and fewer natural elements like woodland and sand dunes.
As can be seen, there were a few holiday cottages and one hotel on the west coast of Seaville in 1980, while permanent houses replaced those cottages and the hotel was expanded in the same area in 2021.
In the northwest of Seaville is a golf course where it used to be woodland. A new road had been developed, connecting east parts to a retirement village and a boat club next to the river.
In 2021, A bigger hotel alone with a restaurant can be found on the south coast, replacing the tea room and sand dunes. New holiday cottages were built on the east bank and a highway across the river enables residents to go to other parts of the village.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...village, Seaville, from 1980 to 2010. Overall, Seaville had been changed drama...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69642857143 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51739272988 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3817346174 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131648073331 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612852583653 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641216949691 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789369595209 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689894991871 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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