With time, people are becoming too lazy and they are prone to a lot of medical problems and as a result, they put down a lot of weight. This essay will examine the main causes of the deteriorating health rate of humans and possible solutions to this problem.
The two main causes of the increase in human weight might be due to eating a lot of junk food and not having food at regular intervals. We don't know how the food is prepared in restaurants, they might be using the same oil for years and mixing chemicals to make it tasty and as a result, it causes several other problems after consuming it. For instance, one of my friends ate food in a restaurant continuously for 2 days and was admitted to a hospital due to food poisoning. Nowadays, due to work pressure and stress people aren't following any food habits due to which may cause several health problems. For example, due to scheduled meetings and deadlines, software engineers need to meet the requirements and sometimes need to have lunch at 4 pm which is the main reason for obesity.
The common solution to this problem can be creating awareness among the people to eat healthily and completely avoiding outside food helps to have a long life and trying to have a small number of carbohydrates and more proteins. Doing exercise regularly for at least half an hour will help to stay fit and healthy.
To summarise, with changes in society we need to change our habits like eating at proper intervals of time, avoiding junk food, exercising regularly will help to have a healthier life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, at least, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63043478261 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5877074378 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.4564832083 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107587552478 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484016539888 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335492369379 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06455615804 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387907631738 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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