You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where r

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

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The diagram illustrates the floor plan of the building that exists and also the proposed plan with some changes to the existing building.

Overall, the major difference in both the buildings is that the hall is removed in the proposed plan and in the kitchen furniture is added.

First of all, building consists of two entrances one in he south and the other in the north-west direction. As soon as we enter from the south entrance, we are in the hall and consists of storage under on the stairs on the right side of the hall. If we go straight until we reach the dead-end of the hall, it consists of two doors one on the left and the other on the right. Left door leads to kitchen and right door leads into the living room and there is a wall between these rooms for separation.

On the other hand, in the proposed plan there is no hall and immediately on the left, it consists of two doors to enter into kitchen. This kitchen consists of special kitchen furniture. As we walk from the entrance to a certain distance, there are stairs and on the right, there is a living room with wall removed between them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in the south'?
Suggestion: in the south
... building consists of two entrances one in he south and the other in the north-west directi...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42718446602 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31914903737 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45145631068 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9709491632 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122150740974 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639641991375 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939419408699 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124324756462 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111971701314 0.0819641961636 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.