In some countries young people are encouraged to work or a year between finishing high school and starting University studies
Work or traveling are prospesting many people that among them when graduating senior high school need time to refresing even exist several people want to getting work before continue their study in a University that in some countries adult people are supported to work for a year between ending high school and starting University studies.
Sometimes, the young people preparing themselves to study when they enough money to pay the tuition fees therefore they choosing to work by the purpose were collecting much money and did not want weighed down feel of parent but for others who have much money that using it for traveling to enjoy in some tourism place before confronting the university world that they think,will spent time to learning and must adaptation with other people from different cities,culture,personality or characteristic.
However, working and traveling really consuct in adult life which at the time is processing to be one and that depend on each mind set but if the society just spent time to work or traveling without mediate over continuing university so their knowledge and skill will not develop while as past the time many companies need the employers by certificate and good capasity of people.
In conclution, even the young people desire to work or traveling for a year still the university lecture is more important to preparing the future to be better.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2015-06-16 | hartati rahayu | 50 | view |
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to becomea a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views 55
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or a year between finishing high school and starting University studies 50
Work or traveling are prospesting many people that among them when graduating senior high school need time to refresing even exist several people want to getting work before continue their study in a University
Description: can you re-write this sentence? Don't forget punctuation marks.
the young people preparing themselves to study when they enough money to pay the tuition fees
the young people are preparing themselves to study when they have enough money to pay the tuition fees
therefore they choosing to work by the purpose were collecting much money and did not want weighed down feel of parent
therefore they choose to work by the purpose to collect money and did not want to be weighed down by parent
Sentence: Sometimes, the young people preparing themselves to study when they enough money to pay the tuition fees therefore they choosing to work by the purpose were collecting much money and did not want weighed down feel of parent but for others who have much money that using it for traveling to enjoy in some tourism place before confronting the university world that they think,will spent time to learning and must adaptation with other people from different cities,culture,personality or
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, post-determiner
Suggestion: Refer to they and enough
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to must and adaptation
Sentence: Work or traveling are prospesting many people that among them when graduating senior high school need time to refresing even exist several people want to getting work before continue their study in a University that in some countries adult people are supported to work for a year between ending high school and starting University studies.
Error: prospesting Suggestion: prospecting
Error: refresing Suggestion: refreshing
Sentence: However, working and traveling really consuct in adult life which at the time is processing to be one and that depend on each mind set but if the society just spent time to work or traveling without mediate over continuing university so their knowledge and skill will not develop while as past the time many companies need the employers by certificate and good capasity of people.
Error: consuct Suggestion: conduct
Error: capasity Suggestion: capacity
Sentence: In conclution, even the young people desire to work or traveling for a year still the university lecture is more important to preparing the future to be better.
Error: conclution Suggestion: conclusion
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Words: 231 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 231 350
No. of Characters: 1145 1500
No. of Different Words: 138 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.899 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.957 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.541 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 46.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 28.477 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.504 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.817 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5