I agree that the Internet is helpful for our life but not necessary to live with it whole life.
Nowadays, most people in the world can access the Internet to support their work and study. Although it brings users a large number of benefits, it causes some troubles at once. Firstly, the Internet makes people addicted to surfing on it all day long. It possibly results in many health problems such as eye diseases, backache, sleep deprivation. Next, the risk of stealing private information is an issue to be concerned by many governments because more and more Internet users are easy-going to provide information to some risky websites. They are taken advantage of illegal business without awareness. Providing one day a stranger call and bother you but you do not know how they get your phone number. Is it dangerous? Therefore, we do need to secure our information in the networking environment. Lastly, our life has a lot of meaningful things to do, not just media, social networks, virtual life, but the Internet has taken us too much time on it. Since the Covid-19 pandemics have become common, working and studying online is inevitable. We spend hours and hours checking emails, notifications and easily get distracted from our daily activities with family and friends.
In conclusion, everything has its pros and cons, and the same goes for the Internet. We need it as a means of communication to support our life but not fully life needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ork and study. Although it brings users a large number of benefits, it causes some troubles at on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90650406504 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71968232603 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650406504065 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8275961427 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177211160353 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485280358816 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484386139242 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135331906634 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428289364184 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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