Smoking causes major damages to the health of the public. Health insurance companies are considered to pay for these illnesses. Although there are valid points to the contrary, in this essay I will contend why banning tobacco and relavant products will not result in an enhancement in public health.
Firstly, it is vitally importanct to notice that forbidding people to do something will not neseccarily lead to an actual avoidance. Although at first it might sound influencial to ban the usage of cigarettes, yet, it might cause many other side effects which are even more threatening. The tabacco industry facing an obstacle, might decide turning into an illigal industry, and persue the demand of its’ costumers. Meanwhile costumers, furuious by the regulations applied by the decision makers, might persist purchasing cigaretts. It is even likely that forcing people not to purchase cigaretts, would backfire, and a dramatic growth in the number of new smokers takes place.
Secondly, and even more importantly, is the lack of governal control over an illigal industry. Cigarrets being banned, people will buy it anyway, while the government will not be able to have a control over the industry and to check the minimum standards of the quality of the products. Therefor, even more health threatening issues migh come up, following by a decreas in ailments ensued by smoking cigaretts.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position on the inefficiency of illigalizing tabacco industry thoroughly. Instead, it is far more effective to run educational campains and informing the public the dangers smoking cigaretts cause, both short and long term.
- Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities For this reason some jobs are better done by men and others by women Do you agree or disagree 61
- The following is a diagram of mobile phone recycling process Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today In the interest of public health governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products Do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'its'?
Suggestion: its
...igal industry, and persue the demand of its’ costumers. Meanwhile costumers, furuiou...
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Line 2, column 416, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...nd persue the demand of its’ costumers. Meanwhile costumers, furuious by the regulations ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27819548872 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82551749213 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.219090066 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153746197894 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586571582244 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783716607062 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958699813836 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720182529543 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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