Some people think that visiting other countries is a waste of time and money. Do you agree/disagree?
As a result of the rapid globalization process, the travelling rate of people today is higher than ever. Some people think visiting other countries is a waste of time and money and is not beneficial at all. I disagree with the above-mentioned statement and in this essay, I am going to assert my point of view with proper examples and arguments.
To begin with, a journey outside the borders can be educative. There are various things you can learn abroad in every aspect you wish. You can potentially enhance your general knowledge and improve your understandings and awareness of new customs, cultures, people and places, thus, making you smarter and more intellectual.
Secondly, It is fun. Someone might find it exciting to go to different places, meet new people and learn about all the diversity and culture that the world has to offer. Travelling can bring joy and happiness to people.
In conclusion, I ponder that visiting countries abroad is not a misuse of finances and time. It can improve the comprehension of people and be entertaining as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 1373.03311258 64% => OK
No of words: 179.0 270.72406181 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93296089385 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88338521575 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625698324022 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 419.366225166 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3210142769 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2727272727 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292222276539 0.272083759551 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992239869145 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15588157532 0.0662205650399 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15486943798 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107394113771 0.0443174109184 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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