The article are about colonization on ''Titan" rather than mars and provide three main reasons to support the theory. However, the lecture in the favor of colony on mars and disputes the reasons made in reading.
Firstly, The article suggests that atmospheric pressure on titan is comparable to earth so it will be easy to survive in the same atmospheric pressure. In contrast, the lecture suggests that chances of survival on Mars is better than Titan. Pressure does not matter because we have to put the suit all the time to survive in new atmosphere. The most important component is oxygen and water the water amount is greater on Mars than Titan.
Secondly, the article claims that gravity on Titan is much lower than on Mars which is twice of the earth gravity. The benefit of lower gravity is it will easy to travel and we need less fuel. On the other hand, lecturer contend that gravity play role only in landing , otherwise it create problem in survival. He further explains that fuel consumption can be ignore in case of better survival environment.
Finally, the reading suggests that distance play important role. Article explains that although the distance between Earth and Titan is greater but less fuel required to travel through vacuum so we can say distance is less important and this is good place for living. The lecture, on the other hand, posits that this is ridiculous to ignore the distance because it can lead delay in communication as well as more time to bring supply.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ospheric pressure on titan is comparable to earth so it will be easy to survive i...
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... is better than Titan. Pressure does not matter because we have to put the suit a...
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... lower gravity is it will easy to travel and we need less fuel. On the other hand...
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...On the other hand, lecturer contend that gravity play role only in landing , othe...
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...tance between Earth and Titan is greater but less fuel required to travel throug...
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... between Earth and Titan is greater but less fuel required to travel through vac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, well, in contrast, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 257.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85992217899 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49193458913 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505836575875 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4116711214 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0769230769 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06452816374 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174926135782 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598274989543 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420700700018 0.0662205650399 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10413733894 0.162205337803 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304217745737 0.0443174109184 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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