It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours
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It is undoubtedly true that everyone has different perceptions as to how they choose to construct their working days.In my opinion, I firmly believe that it is much more satisfying to work three days with extended hours.I feel this way for several reasons , which I will explore in my body paragraphs.
To begin with, life is full of unplanned emergencies, so in a situation where one tends to work three days in a week, One can have a plethora of time to attend to important issues.To be more specific, this has been seen as another life saving technique.My own experience is an intelligent example of this.While I was working with a pharmaceutical firm, I had the opportunity of working on a lengthy three days a week.At first, it wasn't convenient for me due to fact that i didn't have a maid to help me care for my kids.However, i later appreciated this privilege while my last baby experienced seizure, and needed to be attended to immediately.Luckily, this happened while i was at home and with this, I was able to take care of him.Besides, this has been much helpful in the sense that i have been able to bond with my kids better compare to while i was working in a suburb region where I had to work for five days.If i hadn't been around at the time the incident happened I might have lost my inestimable jewel.For this reason, it is certainly clear to see why working extendedly for three days save my sons life.
Furthermore,a preliminary study conducted by the ministry of work, Idaho chapters shows that people who have good mental state of health are those that work extensively for three days a week, because getting a stress buster is a routine for them as they can always utilize the remaining days to relax.Drawing from my own experience.My mum works lengthily for three days without experiencing any health issues even for the fact that she cooks for the family on a daily basis.All I could deduce is that she takes enough sleep while she is away from work, and this has really bolster her mental health because she never had the course to visit the hospital.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe that it is much more beneficial to work on a lengthy three days.This is because it makes us more available to attend to emergency issues, and because it strengthens one's mental health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, while, as to, i feel, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67804878049 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82197958335 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 20.1344086022 507% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 350.386483044 48.9658058833 716% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 479.5 100.406767564 478% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.5 20.6045352989 497% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.5 5.45110844103 504% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304708523518 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173912284419 0.076458572812 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716479997004 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174346461104 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714037645491 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.9 11.7677419355 441% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.59 58.1214874552 -41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.9 10.1575268817 413% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.05 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.85 8.01818996416 148% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 10.0537634409 426% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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