Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility? What is your opinion?
It is often argued that whether government should bear the cost of education and healthcare or not. I conceive a notion that the central bodies ought to take responsibility of mentioned services and the reasons for my perception are elucidated in ensuing paragraphs.
The foremost reason I would like to put forth is that education is extremely vital for one to live a better life in this contemporary time. In other words, if a person is illiterate, it will be utmost hard for him/her to find a job and fend himself/herself. In turn, poverty will be the end result of it and the overall developement of a country can be hindered significantly.
Additionally, healthcare expenses are skyrocketing in the modern world. Therefore, everyone cannot afford health insurance and if they become ill, they also try to avoid going for health check up. Consequently, their health deteriorate and they also spread diseases in society. ultimately, overall health of a nation can be severely affected by it.
On the other hand, a group of individuals might argue that by rendering free education and health benefits, government has to suffer a lot financially. It is true at some degree but many panaceas such as levy more taxes on general population based on their income can be a vital new source of income that can help the central body to achieve the desired outcome.
To summarize and recapitulate , it is quite conspicuous from aforementioned deliberation that although it is daunting process to develope a secondary income, it can ameliorate standard of living of general public and ultimately society and nation both can benefit from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, second, so, therefore, as to, such as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06642066421 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07083464402 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.010415715 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130673216175 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511854946234 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738794051704 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739657359065 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766633625646 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.