Nowaday's, travelling has become more advanced with the increment of the technology aspects. The question is many countries open their doors to more and more tourists. Yes the advantages of increased tourists are more than disadvantages and i will discusse advantages and disadvantages in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, there are several advantages of increased travellers and the first and foremost benefit is countries economy become developed. To make it more clear, tourist visit in different countries because they like to watch attraction place and tourist also spend money on tickets that can help to develop countries economy. A survey was conducted in USA and individuals obtain that the USA make many attraction place for travellers. Hence, nations are become finacially strong.
Furthermore, second advantage is individuals bonds increased with other peoples. In other words, if in any place have many tourists visites and tourists talk with other people. Meanwhile, they share their culture information so, people gain more knowledge about other cultures. On the other hand, there are few disadvantage of increase in the number of tourists and the major one is increased population. To elobrate, the chances of diseases are become increased because masses meet with other people that can be harmful for country. For instance, newspaper of mexico reveled that the 90% countries population are increased due to tourists. As a result, nations suffer with problems because of traveller.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantagesof increased masses but advantages are more than disadvantages such as economy is developed and gain more knowledge about other culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57142857143 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90956807459 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53667953668 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1621159248 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396483290988 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134802084265 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100705285806 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277134157223 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132343164237 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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