MANY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT MODERN MUSIC CAN HAVE A NEGATIVE IMPACT ON THE YOUNG. OTHERS BELIEVE THE EFFECT OF MODERN MUSIC IS POSITIVE.
DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
There is an ongoing discussion about innovative music that some have the idea that it may spoil young people whereas others are the opposite. However, from my perspective, it is how mature the audience will decide whether modern music is harmful or not.
On the one hand, there are some people who criticize modern music perhaps because it exposes youngsters and young adults to such sensitive and appropriate content, which somehow has an adverse influence on their mental development. It is several risky genres of music, such as rock, rap or hip-hop, contains a huge length of unacceptable lyrics and images that promote bullying, sex or violation of laws via using illegal drugs and marijuana. This in the long term probably makes a considerable change in the young’s personality as they will follow what happens in the songs, then trigger off a number of antisocial behaviours.
On the other hand, proponents of innovative music are more likely to suggest that music can be used as a practical way to express singers’ belief and successful life stories. There are a wide variety of helpful songs that raise the audience's awareness of what is happening around them, for instance, songs related to significant social issues such as politics and environmental themes, and these songs are able to create a wave of social change, especially among young people. Moreover, other songs appear to motivate young generations to pursue their dreams through telling them what this certain singer experienced and underwent to reach the top or how he or she dealt with depression, such as Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger and Titanium, by some well-known musicians.
Nevertheless, in my opinion, I would argue that effects of modern music definitely depend on the listener’s level of maturity and perception. If a person listening to music is mature enough to identify right and wrong and listens just to enjoy the song’s melody and rhythm, then he or she will not be affected by whatever message is conveyed. In contrast, if a person’s mind is still very young and gets easily carried away by what he sees or listens to, then he must be guided by parents on what types of songs he should listen to.
In conclusion, dangerous content in modern music seems to be the reason why such a view is held by some people while the fact that some other songs can deliver meaningful messages is what makes others believe the opposite. For all that, I believe age is a determining factor in the impacts of modern music.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'audiences'' or 'audience's'?
Suggestion: audiences'; audience's
...variety of helpful songs that raise the audiences awareness of what is happening around t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96453900709 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67482154325 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583924349882 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4383801562 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.538461538 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5384615385 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282988389902 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109588818799 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838658687954 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168975708987 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924895400226 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'audiences'' or 'audience's'?
Suggestion: audiences'; audience's
...variety of helpful songs that raise the audiences awareness of what is happening around t...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96453900709 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67482154325 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583924349882 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4383801562 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.538461538 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5384615385 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282988389902 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109588818799 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838658687954 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168975708987 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924895400226 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.