It is believed by some individuals that, parents who have their children studying in a domestic school do not need to pay the taxes. From my perspective, this proposition is not true for two main reasons as follows.
To begin with, it is a legal responsibility for all citizens to pay tax, since the money generated by-laws will be used to promote the overall welfare of society. For example, the financial disbursement does not only focus on the education system but also on transportations, community, scientific research, and many more. Thus, it is a duty of each and every one of us to shoulder the responsibility altogether. In that case, the opinion of parents whose children study in private schools is not definitely inappropriate.
Furthermore, everyone has their own rights, and it would be unfair to implement modifications to a specific group, especially when it belongs to the private system. That is to say, dwellers will patronize such an option that their money should be used for their personal purposes, Hence, the balance in the learning system would be in jeopardy and that is why this thinking should not be considered at all.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that paying taxes is the responsibility of each citizen, and those parents having their children pursue private schools are no exception.
- To ease traffic problems people are encouraged to live close to their workplaces schools To what extent do you agree or disagree with this Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 89
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...h, and many more. Thus, it is a duty of each and every one of us to shoulder the responsibility al...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03539823009 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02056542565 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3022960475 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.444444444 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273410388661 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986862107492 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574291402301 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155188195514 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215100487487 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...h, and many more. Thus, it is a duty of each and every one of us to shoulder the responsibility al...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03539823009 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02056542565 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3022960475 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.444444444 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273410388661 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986862107492 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574291402301 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155188195514 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215100487487 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.