Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the Local Council that they decided to demolish the Old Market Center in the Old Town.
This building has been a historic landmark of our area for over 100 years. This is a Flea Market where people can sell previously-owned merchandise. But the important thing is that the style of the building belongs to the Baroque architecture. Whether it is sculpture or color, it has a unique artistic atmosphere. Even so, after a long period of used and insufficient maintenance, the building became dilapidated, case it lost the gorgeous and solemn feeling of the year.
I believe that the Old Market Center can be restored. I suggest it can be used to house a tourist information center or community center. As far as the fundraising is concerned, I hope the Council can promote and publicize the maintenance of the building. Moreover, I suggest if the Council can build the shopping center close to residential that can conveniently people to buy daily necessities.
I hope that the Local Council reconsiders its decision of destroying the Old Market Center.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04663212435 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07263060265 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585492227979 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3654756548 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1666666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268186218797 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871937429738 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623970222629 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155099638347 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398553593553 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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