Your friend invited you to his/her party, but you are unable to attend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
•explain why you cannot come
•give your reason for not contacting your friend sooner
•suggest another time to meet
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ____________,
Dear Amit,
I'm so happy to hear from you! Thanks for your invitation but unfortunately I won't be able to make it for your anniversary celebration.
Actually I'm travelling out of town for an important business meeting. I tried to convince my client to postpone this meeting, but he was not ready to do so. This means that I'll be travelling on the night of your event.
I'm really sorry for not getting in touch with you sooner and letting you know at the last hour. I was expecting that he would understand my position. To my surprise, he was not flexible to make the alterations. I really thought that my schedule would change and I would join you for the party.
Anyway, I will be back two days after your anniversary and was hoping to catch up with you this coming weekend. I've heard good reviews about the new restaurant at Bakers Street. Let's meet up for lunch and gossip about your party.
I want all to know about everything. Looking forward to seeing you this Saturday
Warmest regards,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Amit, Im so happy to hear from you! Thanks for y...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...r anniversary celebration. Actually Im travelling out of town for an important...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...avelling on the night of your event. Im really sorry for not getting in touch w...
^^
Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... catch up with you this coming weekend. Ive heard good reviews about the new restau...
^^^
Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ut the new restaurant at Bakers Street. Lets meet up for lunch and gossip about your...
^^^^
Line 11, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king forward to seeing you this Saturday Warmest regards, John
^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Warmest'.
Suggestion: The Warmest
...forward to seeing you this Saturday Warmest regards, John
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is Saturday Warmest regards, John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, but, look, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64640883978 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53721725196 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1847245547 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6923076923 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251845225699 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815313538822 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807618763411 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142724956414 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751435479526 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.