Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of children playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With an increase, to the access and availability of computers nowadays, more and more children are now playing computer games. Though are many side effects to this habit, in this essay we will discuss the ill effects of children playing PC games and how these habits can be reduced.
The side effects of playing computer games on children is usually seen in the age group of 10 to 16 Years old. These children have shown problems like irritation to the eyes, redness due to continuous exposure to the PC screen. Apart from this issue, some children are often seen to be overweight and less active. Due to the continuous use of computer the eyes of the children get dried up, which is causing such types of irritation and redness. PUBG is one of the most famous game now a days. With an increasing number of players daily, this game has become very famous in the gamer world. The kids also enjoy playing this game and often forget, how long they have been playing it. They repeatedly face issue like sprain in the hands or shoulder.
While playing computer games is not a bad habit, but the if the amount of time playing the game is too high, that is a point of concern. To tackle these issues, parents must step forward and take things under their control. They must restrict the time limit of children who are playing, and get the kids involved in the physical activities daily. They should get the kids either play football, swimming, or any sort of activities. This will also help the kids to take a break from their studies and e-games and be more involved in their mental and physical growth.
Though, there are side effects of children playing computer games however, if the parents keep few restrictions, and get the kids involved in physical activities, then the children will be able to enjoy the physical and the gaming world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, while, apart from, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66257668712 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30519788637 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2771732144 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343442776312 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114678724378 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906650524082 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240712329959 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484582950686 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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