Write about the following topic:
In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words
News displayed on television and newspapers are followed by many people. However, young people have not cultivated this habit of keeping themselves up-to-date with the current affairs of the world. One can try to make simple alterations to attract the young minds so that they can read or watch news.
Firstly, in an era of technological disruption, the youth do not have the time to read newspaper booklets which consists of about twenty to twenty five pages. The words displayed on it are too small which makes most of them difficult to read. Secondly, the news that is broadcasted on television or advertised in newspapers are crime related information. Because the younger generations are more artistic, they find such news quite dull and boring. For instance, Indian news channels only advertise news related to rape cases, murder or politics. Such information are repetitive thereby leading the young people to lose interest in watching news.
By following few changes, the youth can develop an interest in watching and reading news. Newspapers can advertise news in an artistic way in order to grab their attention. For example, young people prefer watching memes and cartoons. Therefore, the editors can design the newspapers and display pictorial news with keywords and less information. This not only saves the time of young people but also allow them to develop an interest in current affairs. Furthermore, television channels should broadcast news of multiple genres other than crime and politics. News related to science, inventions and entertainment mainly interest the young minds.
To conclude, the youth hardly prefer watching or reading news which are lengthy, time consuming and repetitive. Instead, news should become more short and picturesque with variety of topics to draw their eye towards the papers and news channels.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...s, murder or politics. Such information are repetitive thereby leading the young pe...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an artistic way" with adverb for "artistic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ing news. Newspapers can advertise news in an artistic way in order to grab their attention. For e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32423208191 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7047474724 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542662116041 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0171790391 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208005614875 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073698697026 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412785958302 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137989911357 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452760496852 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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