Everyone has the human rights of freedom, living and loving. However, loving in college has been a controversial topic. It is a common belief that, students are not allowed to love when we in college. But try to think on the positive side, if we are in a positive relationship then nothing is bad and even makes us better. So I agree with that idea “It is a good idea to fall in love in college”. And this essay will address the reasons for my views as follow.
Firsly, Love in college when we love someone better, who has more experience in life they can guide us, help us realize more things in life, we can learn from them to good. They can give us suggestions for our good or bad points to help us change in a positive direction, helping us to improve ourselves more. It's really positive if we meet good people.
Seconly, Lovers can be our support when we are under pressure. Living away from home is never easy. We are pressured from studies, exams, part-time jobs or money matters. Because we are afraid that our parents will worry, it's not like we can confide in our parents about everything. So having someone who understands me, is around and really wants to listen will make me feel lighter and happier.
Finally, falling in love with a wonderful person will help us to seriously think and strive for the future. We can set our own goals, know what we want and do to become better, and work to make them come true.
Besides the positive side, there is still a negative side like meeting the wrong person and being in a toxic relationship makes YOU worse. There are many stories of Young people because meeting the wrong person leads to very serious consequences. In conclusion love is never bad, if we know how to love properly, meet good people, stay in a positive relationship, we will be supported and trusted by everyone. Believe that love is still a beautiful feeling. Everyone has their own life and choices, but first, please protect YOURSELF, choose carefully, don't let it lead to things that are not worth it.
Everyone has the human rights of freedom, living and loving. However, loving in college has been a controversial topic. It is a common belief that, students are not allowed to love when we in college. But try to think on the positive side, if we are in a positive relationship then nothing is bad and even makes us better. So I agree with that idea “It is a good idea to fall in love in college”. And this essay will address the reasons for my views as follow.
Firsly, Love in college when we love someone better, who has more experience in life they can guide us, help us realize more things in life, we can learn from them to good. They can give us suggestions for our good or bad points to help us change in a positive direction, helping us to improve ourselves more. It's really positive if we meet good people.
Seconly, Lovers can be our support when we are under pressure. Living away from home is never easy. We are pressured from studies, exams, part-time jobs or money matters. Because we are afraid that our parents will worry, it's not like we can confide in our parents about everything. So having someone who understands me, is around and really wants to listen will make me feel lighter and happier.
Finally, falling in love with a wonderful person will help us to seriously think and strive for the future. We can set our own goals, know what we want and do to become better, and work to make them come true.
Besides the positive side, there is still a negative side like meeting the wrong person and being in a toxic relationship makes YOU worse. There are many stories of Young people because meeting the wrong person leads to very serious consequences. In conclusion love is never bad, if we know how to love properly, meet good people, stay in a positive relationship, we will be supported and trusted by everyone. Believe that love is still a beautiful feeling. Everyone has their own life and choices, but first, please protect YOURSELF, choose carefully, don't let it lead to things that are not worth it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, if, really, so, still, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55585831063 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41670480233 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547683923706 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.213064138 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.619047619 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4761904762 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395293796939 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123676131033 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117076825385 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231818893947 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175780149817 0.056905535591 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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