Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.otgers argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
People believe that it is the best way to acknowledge the terrible position in our life, for instant having an disappointing work or lack of money. However, others people disagree with this idea and they think that making efforts and trying to improve any bad circumstances is better. This essay will discuss both the views in detail.
On the one hand, some people insist that we should accept the bad situation. Most of them have no courage to change their lives, they still undergo the circumstances and think that it is their own lives to be like this. For instance, people who are doing a job with poor condition, bad manager and low salary still stay in the organisation and do not quit the job because they scare of unpredictable life and there is no courage for them to change. They worried about the time with unemployment and can not put up with it. Consequently, people accept the situation and do not change anything to enrich their living. Moreover, there are some position that is hard to acknowledge. For example, serious illness let many people become stressed, they believe that it is the punishment and some of them also think of the death. Therefore, people tend to accept what is happening to them.
On the other hand, there are still individuals show their best to have a happier and better existence even though they need to face up with the worst situation. For example, Nguyen Ngoc Ky is a disable but he managed his life and overcome the circumstances after lots of efforts. He tried hard so that he succeeded to write with his feet, Nguyen Ngoc Ky became an excellent teacher in Vietnam. Obviously, try your best to enhance yourself can result in a better life or be more positive about the world.
In conclusion, people have their own choices whether to accept the poor condition or improve the life. In my opinion, if we have courage to change a terrible situation, we can gain more success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...osition in our life, for instant having an disappointing work or lack of money. Ho...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tuation. For example, Nguyen Ngoc Ky is a disable but he managed his life and overcome th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71597633136 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54596070262 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523668639053 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6843823296 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7647058824 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20720275443 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684830628803 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549977439837 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120790587832 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508296830166 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.