Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.otgers argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
There is a debate about whether people should accept bad situations or try to improve them. this essay aims to discuss both sides of the view and give my own perspectives.
on one hand, accepting several problems can help reduce negative senses since there are a lot of troubles people might face in life, and forgetting some could help people relax and focus more on their main goals. Additionally, some situations just occur in a short period of time, therefore, accepting them means improving the willingness to get through a tough time.
on the other hand, accepting bad situations could bring drawbacks in drawbacks since some people might become lack motivation and tend to give up instead of finding out the solutions. moreover, they might find that accepting bad situations is the way to relieve stress and pressure from life and work while the truth is that they don’t want to get out of the familiar boundaries and make effort, consequently, they might never succeed or achieve the things they desire.
Having an unsatisfying job or a shortage of money are basic examples of problems that have a long-term impact on life as people often stick to a job for months or even years, and they couldn’t also make money in a short period of time, which means unless people improve their situations, their life won’t be better, as they might struggle with them for a long time.
In conclusion, accepting difficult situations can sometimes be helpful. however, it is not the best way to problems that affect life in the long term such as having an unsatisfying job or a shortage of money. In my opinion, it would be better to find ways to solve those issues
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57387006253 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.5654749373 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.6 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312477812545 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123118748367 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814587887538 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167309259793 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04077239998 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.