Beyond a shadow of a doubt, nowadays, students who come from middle and lower class have to face a lot of financial crisis due to expensive living cost world wide. On that ground, many times students might have to compromise their education and might have to work hard in order to pay tution fees which mitigates their focus on their academic career. Apparently, friends are the ones who can always provide them right suggestions to reduce their living expenses. In this regard, according to my perspective sharing house with other people will reduce expenses. On the other side, I contend that depending less on techongy or buying cheap from from outside would not help students in such matters. For the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my stance.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that irrefutably, sharing house with other people would help to reduce living expenses in various ways. To be more specific, roommates would share housing rent when they live together. Not only this but also, they have to share other day-to-day expenses such as electric bil, water bill, gas bill, and etc. Consequently, people who choose to live with roommates will indirectly face less housing burden since all of housing bill will be shared among all people in the house, and thereby, it would be much easier to bare the load. To shed more light on this, my own life example is a complelling example of what has been elaborate above. When I was pursuing my master degree, my father had lost his job due pandemic. Accordingly, I had been left with two options, either leaving my education half way or sharing my house with other my friends. Fortunately, my three other friends were agreed to move with me in one house. In fact, I used to pay $ 1600 each month for my housing rent and after moving to other people, it was reduced to $400 each month. Ultimatly, It is judicious to say that sharing house helped me to survive during my tough times.
Another noteworthy point is that roommates not only help to reduce housing bills but also serve as a helping hand in the household chores. As a matter of fact, in the contemporary world, university students have to cope up with various ongoing academic activities inwhich they must have to be precise to collct academic score. Thus, it has become extensively hard in taking care of their own health as well their house. In suc a scenarios, they might have to hire cook or buy food for themselves on everyday which end up costing a lot of money at the month end. To exemplify, as I mentioned earlier in the paragraph, during my university days, my and my friends used to collective helped each other to clean the house. Besided, we, together used to cook for ourself and never bought a outside restaurant food. Therefore, we saved a lot of money at monthy end which would not had possible if I refuted to share my home with them.
Admittedly, buying low-budget equipements or consuming low-quality cheaper can reduce living cost. However, it not wise to decision to make. This is because in the modern world, techonology scuh as cellphones and laptops are being used for education purposes which lead to would create a dependecy on such gujdets. Now, seeing from other sight, students get frequntly sick and may face health issues if they eat low-qualty food because it doesnot provide essential nutrients to them. Hence, these circumstances reinforce me to posit that it is not a resonable idea to cut down expenses on such crucial subjects.
To reciptulate, by contemplating all remarks, in spite of the fact that some may not agree with my viewpoint, I utterly think that students should share their rooms with others to reducde living cost. This is because housemates would pay half of the housing bills and because having more people in the house, they do not need to hire cook which would aid them to save cost on cooking.
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- TOEFL T P O 21 Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...ial crisis due to expensive living cost world wide. On that ground, many times students mi...
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Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...ial crisis due to expensive living cost world wide. On that ground, many times students mi...
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Line 2, column 639, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
...ending less on techongy or buying cheap from from outside would not help students in such...
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Line 4, column 345, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... as electric bil, water bill, gas bill, and etc. Consequently, people who choose to live...
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Line 4, column 991, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$1600'.
Suggestion: $1600
...me in one house. In fact, I used to pay $ 1600 each month for my housing rent and afte...
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Line 6, column 428, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a scenario' or simply 'scenarios'?
Suggestion: a scenario; scenarios
... own health as well their house. In suc a scenarios, they might have to hire cook or buy fo...
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Line 6, column 500, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...hire cook or buy food for themselves on everyday which end up costing a lot of money at ...
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Line 6, column 784, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ed to cook for ourself and never bought a outside restaurant food. Therefore, we ...
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Line 8, column 116, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wises'?
Suggestion: wises
...can reduce living cost. However, it not wise to decision to make. This is because in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 106.0 52.1666666667 203% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3265.0 1977.66487455 165% => OK
No of words: 681.0 407.700716846 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79441997063 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.10842213422 4.48103885553 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53279968805 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 338.0 212.727598566 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496328928047 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1007.1 618.680645161 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 4.94265232975 324% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6295968433 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.833333333 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199888939428 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558050869992 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465299930063 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118475113362 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259619936019 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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