Nowadays,more and more people from different coties are spending more time away from their families. What are the possible reasons and the effects on people themselves and their families.
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in number of people believing that in various urban areas more populace utilising their time by living away from their families. There are wide range of factors that accounts for why this is happening. this eassy also shed the light on effects of this trend on the person and their family members.
To commence with,there are deluge of reasons of this soaring concern.the most preponderant one is that the modern era is a competitive era .to elaborate this,in today's world ,level of competition is very highand die to this everyone want to achieve their goals. So because of this most people spend their time on the workplace rather than at home. they do not want to lose their chances and opportunities which can lead a helping hand for them to fulfill their dreams. it cannot only contribute to make a person busiest ,but also leadto other effects in their personal life. Needless to say,all these reasons are the main factors of this trend.
Thereare some pitfalls of stayed away from family members. The one that people who are spending less time with their family are having weak relationship with their families. which also leads to familiy conflicts. it is also impact on individual health as they are depressed due to all these kind of situations. For instance, the study results published by government of Australia in March 2017 and April 2018 clearly indicate that less quality of time is the biggest reason behind divoce within husband and wife.
To conclude,having pondered above stated it is crystal clear that spending less quality time withe loved one have a profound impact on family relationship .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95438596491 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52875293822 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1832309959 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299237798794 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955379668743 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883008587246 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176922506351 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708331730555 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.