The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors.
The given table compares the figures of travelers to Ashdown Museum during the previous year and the year after it was renovated while the pie charts indicate the results of surveys on asking visitors in both years.
According to the table, the number of visitors to this museum increased slightly after it was remodeled. In addition, the figure of very satisfied responses grew significantly while the number of dissatisfied answers decreased dramatically.
It can be seen that the total number of travelers to the museum during the year before renovation was 74,000 and the survey at the same year also pointed out the very satisfied responses made up 15% which was nearly two times less than the figure in the year after refurbishment. Additionally, the rate of dissatisfied answers was 40% in the year before repair.
To be more specific, the figure of visitors to this museum increased slightly by 18,000 in the year after refurbishment. Moreover, the ratios of no response and very dissatisfied were the same in this year with 5% for each one. The percentage of dissatisfied responses also decreased noticeably to 15%.
- Some people think that hard work and determination bring success Others think other factors such as money and good appearance are more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people claim that not enough of waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste 73
- The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000 67
- Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with highest marks others say they should accept people with all ages even if they did not do well at school 73
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 The given pie charts compare the percentage of British students at a university in Englan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11827956989 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87724335254 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.760298831 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393080985089 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170384092044 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138632810848 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259670310925 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12490332039 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.