The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013.
Given are the two charts depicting the middling house prices in England and its Capital-London, and to show the comparison regarding the medium house prices in other areas of England.
Looking at the two bar charts, it is immediately obvious that the prices paid for houses in London is higher than England and London also take the lead with the highest average house prices compared with other areas of England.
Perceptibly, In 1995, the cost in order to buy a house in England was approximately 160000 Euro and touched at 200000 Euro in 2013. Next comes London with 200000 Euro after which rose dramatically with 410000 Euro.
Turning to the average house prices in other areas of England. It can be noticed that London was the highest with 400000 Euro, followed by. South East and South West with 310000 Euro and 260000 Euro, respectively. Likes wide, North West and Midlands was regarded with 200000 Euro and 120000 Euro. Lies last to the North East is the smallest with 100000 Euro.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two charts depicting the middling h...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
...use in England was approximately 160000 Euro and touched at 200000 Euro in 2013. Nex...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
...ately 160000 Euro and touched at 200000 Euro in 2013. Next comes London with 200000 ...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
... in 2013. Next comes London with 200000 Euro after which rose dramatically with 4100...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
...ter which rose dramatically with 410000 Euro. Turning to the average house prices i...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
...that London was the highest with 400000 Euro, followed by. South East and South West...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
.... South East and South West with 310000 Euro and 260000 Euro, respectively. Likes wi...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
... South West with 310000 Euro and 260000 Euro, respectively. Likes wide, North West a...
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Line 4, column 275, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
...t and Midlands was regarded with 200000 Euro and 120000 Euro. Lies last to the North...
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Line 4, column 291, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
...as regarded with 200000 Euro and 120000 Euro. Lies last to the North East is the sma...
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Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
... North East is the smallest with 100000 Euro.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85882352941 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36792289223 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0141075704 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7777777778 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306439369115 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151319423528 0.0766984524023 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173134103127 0.0603063233224 287% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241940749276 0.12726935374 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148596500639 0.0580467560999 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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