Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want. Some countries alluring old people to vocations to whatever age that they want. This essay will examine both sides of argument before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some countries in favor of old people can to work to any age that they want. In fact, there are many people who are still healthy, most from 60 to 75, they stills want to continue to contribute, still want to be facilitated but have not been met. Therefore, old people are not only problems to be solved but also opportunities this facilitate support, presumably tends not only to create income conditions for yourself but also contribute to the reduction of economic disadvantage. Second, allowing older people to work at what whatever age they want would probably result in a greater supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that skilled and knowledgeable human capital is imperative to fortes economic growth and technological development in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant and problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once old people to work to any age that they want. First, offering old people to work to any age that they want is synonymous with a tremendous there are some burdens. When they are old, they have physiological and psychological changes to adapt and lead an age-appropriate lifestyle. Second, older people easily switch from positive to negative. Sometimes, they want to pass on their experiences, but because few people listen, they feel sorry for themselves and are easily self-deprecating and pitiful. So the psychological state of the elderly a big problem in allowing them to work at the age they want.
This above essay we can see that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'still'
Suggestion: still
...still healthy, most from 60 to 75, they stills want to continue to contribute, still w...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he advantages outweigh the disadvantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0936329588 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00912964141 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.880092316 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474158640037 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188798617314 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144728698369 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274023132181 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158081086636 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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