Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter:
– Explain why you are unhappy
– Request a refund
– Make arrangements to return the damaged item
Dear Sir or Madam
Last Sunday I purchased a new bag from your famous store and when I went home and tried the new bag, I realized that there were a few defects in the bag. For instance, the accessories on the bag have fallen off and not glued very well and the pocket on the bag has small holes which allow coins to disappear in the bag and the zipper of the bag is not moving very well and that made feel very disappointed for your store has such a great reputation with great products.
I am writing this to demand a refund for the defective bag which cost me three hundred dollars and I will make a second visit to your store the next Sunday at noon to receive my refund because I have the bill of the bag and I trust your judgement.
I look forward to seeing you again
Yours Sincerely,
Susan Swamn
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15923566879 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14084761918 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.7937902017 44.8134815571 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.25 76.5299724578 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.25 16.8248392259 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0421032690715 0.216113520407 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030838174855 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339828168804 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046288302224 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342693502246 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 8.37731958763 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 7.44 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.