Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
“The kind of technology-mediated interactions that lead to positive outcomes are exactly those that are likely to build stronger relationships”. People feel that the good applications of technology and the positive influence of technology much outweigh the disadvantages. The tools available for productivity, cooperation, and interaction that facilitate the working environment. But many people used it to waste their time. This topic will discuss both perspectives with some examples about trade and productivity.
On the one hand, the expansion of cutting-edge technology has opened the way for online markets and commodity trading platforms. Instead of needing to be travelling, consumers may search as far as sell and purchase anything in their concern with a few clicks' buttons on trading platform. For example, in Egypt a couple of decades ago, the notion of a line of people awaiting in front of malls before the doors opened to pick up the flash sales goods on Black Friday was widespread. Nonetheless, due to the rapid growth of online purchasing, the tendency has subsided in recent years. So, technology has made work easier for traders as it become. In addition to that, technology's impact in office is different. As both in communication and manufacturing, has enhanced the rate of production and the speed with which business may be conducted. Furthermore, it has helped employees become significantly more efficient.
On the other hand, despite the ease and convenience of buying and selling in cyberspace. This approach has various disadvantages. For instance, in order to verify the true quality and quantity of items requested, customers must wait a few days for the logistics business to transport and deliver them. Furthermore, if the product's characteristics differ from those advertised. As a result, retailers and physical shops may take use of the distinction and quality to compete with online merchants for devoted clients. Another problem is social media addiction. It keeps one connected to the internet and the phone. Even when employees are not distracted while at work. They may be spending more time on these social media sites, which can have a negative impact on both physical and mental health. Others used to use mobile phone to check work while they are home. So, these two cases make people busier from their duties.
Eventually, everything around us including technology have positive and negative impacts. Some people use technology in the working environment to ameliorate their productivity and others not. It depends on the mindset that can balance between using it at work or at home. Moreover, technology has contributed to changing the concept of the job and assisting many individuals in embracing various lifestyle choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onnected to the internet and the phone. Even when employees are not distracted while at w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2344.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35159817352 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09415907732 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573059360731 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5854787253 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7142857143 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210213588429 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531387173435 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711757385036 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132126072248 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375859085054 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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