Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
William Lyon Mackenzie King was a member of the Canadian parliament and head of the Liberal Party in the first
half of the twentieth century. He held the office of prime minister for a total of twenty-one years, which is a longer period of
time than that of any public servant in the history of Canada. Because his terms of office as prime minister were not
consecutive, he held other positions of public service in many appointed and elected offices as well over a period of fifty
years. Although it could be argued that he was an important world leader on the basis of longevity alone, I admire him
because of his qualities of leadership. He was active in governhttps://www.testbig.com/writingment during two world wars and the Great Depression and
played a key role in guiding Canada during those very difficult years. He understood the importance of a unified nation
and worked to bring various partisan groups together for the higher good of the country. Under his tenure in office,
Canada became a participant in world affairs.
His three terms of office as prime minister were marked by compromise and often criticism, but he earned the
respect of most Canadians for his political astuteness and his determination to unify Canada. In part because of his
friendship with Wilfrid Laurier, he was able to preserve the unity between the French-speaking and English-speaking
provinces, a negotiation that must be considered his greatest achievement. One biographer, John Moir of the University
of Toronto, has identified a quality in King called "essential Canadianness." I understand this to mean that he was able to
understand and represent all of the people of Canada.
King's methods were frustrating to some, but he was able to extend Canadian autonomy and maintain unity while
acting within a difficult federal system. He did so for a very long time, even representing Canada in the international arena
in his elder years. In my view, William Lyon Mackenzie King IS worthy of being named in the company of John F. Kennedy
and Martin Luther King as a world leader who made an important contribution to humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... of twenty-one years, which is a longer period of time than that of any public servant in the ...
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Line 15, column 26, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e was able to understand and represent all of the people of Canada. Kings methods were f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, while, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10734463277 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52071701599 2.67179642975 132% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556497175141 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9285170689 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.53405017921 419% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142476428039 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650644201382 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103132958246 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511111120303 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858480161478 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.