Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?
In the era of urbanisation, real estate and traffic congestion have become head-aching issues. To address
this phenomenon, relocation of enterprises and manufacturing factories in rural areas emerges as a justifiable measure. While it can solve the problem to some extent, there are other alternate approaches.
To begin with, the reconstruction strategy achieve certain results in overcoming traffic jams and housing shortage. Phasing out sizeable factories enable an increase in population with fixed abode. By knocking down blocks of buildings constructed for business purposes, more space is designated for skyrocketing appartments which accommodate a staggering number of residents. In addition to accelerating amount of home owners, the solution alleviates burdens on traffic. As traffic congestion stems from the abundance of commuters, the shift in massive companies' locations results in less participants in the traffic in cities. Moreover, changes in work places' addresses forge surge in social welfare. The less money spent on updating traffic infrastructures, the more gorvenmental budget distributed to those in need.
However, there are alternatives available that end up in the fruit as oppulent as that of moving factories to the surburbs. To be more specific, one straightforward method of which is advancing living conditions in remote areas, such as mountainous regions with hostile climatic characteristics. With the emergence of modern basic emenities and neccessary facilities adopted in secluded parts of the world, a host of citizens are lured away from home and settle down in new homes. Therefore, a major slip in metropolitans' population will become the case.
In conclusion, the avenue of relocating influential firms in the countryside makes contribution to the decline of traffic and housing problems to some degree, but other effective solutions should not be neglected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve become head-aching issues. To address this phenomenon, relocation of enterpris...
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Line 3, column 584, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun participants is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... massive companies locations results in less participants in the traffic in cities. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72183098592 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26329814129 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658450704225 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3649115709 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175042349906 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486740430028 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437811145972 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876339616383 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430062860519 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.