Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that traffic and housing problems could be address by moving large business, factories and their staff to the countryside. From my point of view, i mostly disagree with this notion since it have a plenty of drawback for the individuals and social. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, large companies and factories is the key element to keep huge function for the development of their country, so it need to build in place where have enough financial potential to grow. The countryside will not response enough equipment, facility and morden technology to support the demand of their companies, this will lead terrible affect about the productivity, quantity and quality. Furthermore the required and demand of citizens in the countryside are not big enough to improve the market, productivity and the development of their business. To illustrate, in the city manager have significant morden technology to brings different innovation for changing people's life better than before. In addition, the countryside do not have enough talent and it also do not attractive to the youngs generation who can contribute their ability to the develpment of business, nation and social.
However, moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside could change traffic problems graduately by reduce a number of individuals, car and other means of transport in the city. Moreover, there are a lot of sucessful agriculture companies in the countryside, because these is a place to improve, analyze and research the knowledge about agriculture for their companies. For instance, agriculture companies are hugely helpful for the human, it brings new occupation for them to worry about their life and their family.
To conclude, by my reason and agruement from these essay i totally disagree with their statement, but on some positive aspect large business can change the people's life in countryside more wealthy. Government need to have bright plan to help the individuals live easier ans happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33230769231 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86624261806 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535384615385 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8330235429 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.307692308 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300835230756 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102147596198 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112461870635 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175772806736 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623966958637 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.