Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money could be spend elsewhere.
To what extend do you agree with this view
It is a fact that arts and crafts are the pride of a country and it makes it beautiful and appealing among other nations. It is often suggested that higher authorities must provide funds for developing other amenities instead of wasting money on promoting traditional arts and sculptures. While i strongly believe that government should allocate money to all sectors of economy equally, i also support that the significance of arts and crafts can not be overlooked.
On the one hand, Administration is required to devote finance for building infrastructure of the country. First of all, In today’s contemporary era only those nations can survive which have strong facilities for their citizens. So, authorities supposed to provide monetary resources to establish schools or colleges for allowing children to get better education opportunities that will boost illiteracy rate of the country. Secondly, In these days, many people lives in slum areas and they are unprivileged as they can not afford the expenses to take good treatment from hospitals, therefore, in order to enhance the living standard of poor people, administration should build hospitals in every city where they can access health care services. Finally, Unemployment is becoming a serious issue in some countries such as in India as most of the people depend upon agriculture, so higher authorities should make efforts to construct industries and factories that would create employments for millions of people.
On the other hand, I firmly believe that artists bring diversity in a country, so it should be considered as a important areas to be financed by regime. First of all, Ancient arts are the heritage of the nation as it indicates the history and culture of the country which makes it unique among other parts of the world. That is why, Executives should try to maintain these crafts by spending money time to time. In addition to this, old crafts are the main tourist attractions and visited by many visitors around the globe. Consequently, it leads to growth in economic aspects of a country and should be encouraged by the government. Besides this, if authorities may spend money on traditional arts, it will provide professions to artists and it would result in supporting artistic values in the country and will motivate others to contribute in the well being of arts.
To conclude, Although i advocate the view that all sectors are important and authorities must take into account all of them while establishing national budget, arts are the basis of a nation and it protects customs and traditions of country, so finance should be provided for it.
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also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12761020882 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87751099941 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53596287703 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7117651255 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.333333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7333333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152651873782 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510117144547 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429745200587 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957347355035 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575447236427 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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