Cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade it has made overseas travel much more accessible. Expalain advantages and disadvantages
Nowadays, a large number of people has a growing tendency to visit other countries. The airline ticket prices have been decreased. Due to this trend, everyone has become able to buy a ticket and visit other nations. There are considerable merits and demerits of this phenomenon that I am going to describe.
On the one hand, International travel provides great advantages for individuals as well as for society as a whole. Firstly, when more and more people come into the country, it results in promoting the tourism industry of the country. Moreover, A developed tourism industry brings many employments opportunities for the people which not only boosts the economy of the country but also makes the country unique among other nations. secondly, Unemployment is increasing with the growth of the population, so people can move to other countries in order to earn money. consequently, the country can get the labour to run labour-intensive industries and people can get jobs to earn bread and butter.
On the other hand, Although the trend of overseas travel comes up with substantial benefits, some potential downsides are also brought by this trend. First of all, people can not just visit other countries after buying a ticket, as everyone has to meet immigration requirements and get a visa that includes a huge allocation of money. Additionally, immigrating more and more people from outside might have a detrimental impact on the environment of the country. Because of the increasing population, people prefer to buy private vehicles that contaminate the environment by spreading emissions of poisonous gasses. Apart from this, Homesickness is another outcome of overseas travelling. Staying far from a family member can cause homesickness that can lead to mental illness to people. Therefore, they are not able to survive due to a lack of emotional support.
To conclude, it can be experienced that several advantages and disadvantages are attached to the phenomenon of travelling internationally. while I believe that visiting other countries is a good way of exploring the world, in order to prevent population inclined ticket prices should be managed properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, as for, as to, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29106628242 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04774084607 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553314121037 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.66090839 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0713854322215 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246349207933 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037938918267 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0443623886281 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027200412271 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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