The qualities of admirable people.
The qualities of admirable people.
The quality of admirable people not a most rich person or most famous, or people with the most beautiful outfit. They are people with positive behaviors that contribute to human life and the environment.
In my opinion, an admirable person is someone who never sees things from their personal point of view. Because everyone is operating from their own belief system, based on their background and experience. And that can make people a little a more narrow-minded weird, and mean. Secondly, they are know how to forget the past and always hope for tomorrow. They live to the fullest for a new day, never wallowing in the pain of the past.
Especially, I always admire someone who is never arrogant and considers themselves always know where they have the advantages and disadvantages to modify and develop it, for the disadvantages they modify and always accept the opinions of those around them to modify. As for the advantage, they develop it to get better and better.
Finally, I want only say people can become someone others admire. But the more you get better and better, the more you feel like you will be the one to be admired.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ded weird, and mean. Secondly, they are know how to forget the past and always hope ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, as for, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82673267327 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56388332346 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579207920792 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0960650944 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266831328343 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111778436907 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15714233161 0.0667982634062 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210570942772 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190233789439 0.056905535591 334% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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