Hosting an intrernational event is the most up-coming event in sport entertainment industry these days.
Countries from all around the world are copmiting to have one at thier land.While Others nations are protesting against those events to prevent them from happening. This essay spot a light on both prospects however, I support hosting sport events and I think its perfect economy booster for a country.
Taking South Africa as an example, this country benefited from hosting the world soccer cup FIFA in 2010. from an economice view, thier rate in currency has grow at its highest in decades, creating 10000 job appertunities. In the other hand, South African culture marketing has never been this revival. from the traditional dances, food, customs and even local accents, all these elements gathered in the media to attract new comers to travel to this rich-cultured country, inculding me and my borther.
For those who opposed hosting sporting events, I see that have two resons. one the fear that prices may grew high, which make it difficult to live comfortably in such a developed country like South Africa. the other reason might be that the crime rate esclation in the country. in this devolping country it's common. they take what happen to Brazil for an example.
Over all, I think hosting an entertainment event is beneficial for a counrty, econmicaly and culturally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are copmiting to have one at thier land.While Others nations are protesting against ...
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...are copmiting to have one at thier land.While Others nations are protesting against ...
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...le Others nations are protesting against those events to prevent them from happen...
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...ting the world soccer cup FIFA in 2010. from an economice view, thier rate in curren...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13215859031 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68366920128 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651982378855 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8443994251 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6153846154 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19654086621 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726484571555 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657552419434 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131086247383 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491890732523 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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