Some people think that the news media has become much more influential in people’s lives today and it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?
Journalism is thought to be the negative influence on people’s daily life. I agree with this view, however; I believe that news media also brings positive benefits to people in the modern life. I will give my viewpoints in my essay below.
Although media and communication has the certain influence on the daily life of people, not all of them are positive affects. Actually, the news in the online newspapers is not always true and the journalists usually use headline titles with the unconfirmed information to attract readers. For instance, the scandal of celebrities always be the first news which makes people be curious and click on the link on the news site. Despite the fact that the hot news about famous people is the smart strategy of journalists to get the higher views from readers, some of them are fabricated and misleading the public opinion. That deviation has the enormous impact on the daily life, reputation and career of the key opinion leaders.
On the other hand, journalism also brings beneficial effects on people. It is undeniable that by reading news on newspaper, people can update fastly the breaking news about the world around. One clear example is the news regarding to corona virus and its spread in the community. Due to the significant of problems and the public interest, both traditional journalism and online newspapers have reported regularly about the number of people infected and notable areas in the pandemic map. Therefore, people can update information and prepare the appropriate method to minimize the risks of diseases.
To sum up, although some people think that the influence of news media on people's life is the negative development, I personally believe that it is still the useful tool for people to keep up to the date with the current affairs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...or instance, the scandal of celebrities always be the first news which makes people be cu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01328903654 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6612685104 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531561461794 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7890146732 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.785714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258300432085 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833581666727 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755852328772 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175962983596 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589213334701 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.